Yesterday,
Someone died
Someone very dear to me
He was...a friend, big brother
And my first love
I thought that he'd be here forever
Until I got slapped by reality
Now he's gone
And missed dearly
The part of my heart
That holds love for him
Is hurting so bad
It nearly drives me
Insane
I had no chance to say goodbye
He left quickly and quietly
My only wish is
That these words reach him
Wherever he is.
Goodbye my wanderer
Last night you called me a wanderer so I thought a critique here would be good it's a sad poem and one I wish I had never inspired I've done you many wrongs and although you say I've atoned enough I can't say that I feel that way *shakes my head* not when you can still look so sad so when I get there I will make sure you will be able to be happy and smile and just be you ^_^ I always feel a bit better when I can get you to smile your happiness is what makes me feel that I am righting the wrongs I have done to you and sorry for the bad grammer ^_^; I know it annoys you and others but there is as a reason for it
Beautifully sad, a wonderful tribute...thank you for sharing it.....Poe