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two shots of hate from a mouth as loud as a gun,
like an assasin ... who does it for fun.
two deafening blows in a war that has just begun,
life gone away...i'm done.
two red roses sitting on my coffin, the wind blows, leaving only one
the world i know disappears...like the setting sun.
i like this poem, it is
i like this poem, it is captivating. i like all your poems, you are a talented writer. I wish I could go back in my life and relive all the missed moments but I've learned to let go of the past and start living in the moment. it is hard and i am taking small steps to start living my life again. you are young, you have great things ahead of you! depression is an ugly thing, ive been there. If you learn to open up your heart and mind slowly, you will be amazed at the progress you will make!:) you are brave, you are strong, you can soar! i have hope in you!!;)
You are the only one that has
You are the only one that has said something like that! Thank you!!! :D
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