wrong birth pl

 Concrete streets are not for me.

I cant walk far without pain on my feet.

Born in the wrong place and time.

I need streams and valleys.

I provide food, shelter and comedy.

9 to 5 i was not meant to be.

I want to wake up in a teepee.

Mother nature holding my feet.

How it was meant to be. 

 

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allets's picture

Cool Write

fab topic "nature holding my feet" is one fine poetic phrase - I want to walk on the edge of an active volcano, see the white cliffs of dover from a boat or plane, feel the water of Victoria Falls on my face - tepees are pretty confining -allets-


 

 

chapter31's picture

Thank you for highlighting:

Thank you for highlighting: nature holding my feet. I like that line more now. Ill love to move my tepee all around different parts of nature and step out to different grounds 

Timeful's picture

Beautiful!

Beautiful!


post multa malae accidunt, bonae accidere potest.