Sentry

The station was more quite

than a dog on a dead leash

the kind of silence you can't buy

and most certainly can't teach,

As beings pass to and from exits, first then last,

my entry is stalled abruptly

by a glass pain sentry,

A raspy cotton voice dipped in honey

slides from his tounge to young ears

and the syllables swish the gum lines

in a fine example of eloquence,

He asks for more and more

than what I usually have on hand

but the pockets are floor bare

with a face to which I'm looking without answer,

A busted stance

with rack iron rod

a long list of names

rolls out from the sharded fingernails

the shards are casting my reflection

so this seems like the perfect chance

to calmly

and without haste or hesitation

fix the part in my hair

 

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A Fine Write This

The spaces are so tight nothing gets in but emotions, the choice of setting, the last act as motion and thought and answer is inside exquisite and pure poetry. Not one extra word anywhere - the request, the empty pockets, the reply a simple act, shards, racking fingernail through hair - ahhhh, a sign of the times well described - sentry is a plus plus title - Lady A (I kinda liked this one C)

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