Tell Saturn to Bring the Rings

I told her way back when

I told her to bring the rings

So I can beat her to death with them

But not till after my soaps are done

 

Saturn's a mistress

Somewhere out there, Just

Spinning endless

With it's black mass 

Of dust and sharp metals,

 

I'm all carbon though, sweetie

-Hot air

-Piss and vinegar

-With whatever else

Still vying for a spot

To take place,

 

I'm here

when she's there 

never feeling the absence 

as I answer the questions

she relays in looks of gravity

Its textbook as the teeth come out

-the rings sing 

and then fill my mouth

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I really enjoy the way your

I really enjoy the way your poetry feels like getting a one shot chance at being a mind reader, like I have stepped inside your persona and am veiwing your thoughts with slightly tinted rose coloured glasses, and I am never sure if I feel happy or sad after....


Much Love

Ashley