Life

Life as I know it

Isn't so bad

Still more fun to be had

But it isn't all that thrilling



Life as I love it

Isn't so fun

It's already boring and I've only just begun

To obsorbe it



Life as I feel it

Is full of tears

Broken hearts and unsettled fears

And it's over-estimated



Life as I see it

It can be blinding

Sometimes you spend your whole life hiding

From someone you don't want to find you

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Life is full of ups and downs. It isn't great, but it doesn't totally suck either.

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Greg Lee's picture

Wow, I dont even know what to say about this poem... It really touched me in a special way i think and i'm not even sure why!! I guess cuz i realy felt what you were saying here and i loved every minute of it.. thanks a lot!

-Greg