You Set Me Free

Touching your hand

Feeling your soul

With you I'm happy

I finally feel whole

You opened my eyes

And made me see

That I can be happy

You set me free

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Way to go!! Nice little inspirational piece. It was an enjoyable read. "I finally feel whole" is a good line, and works quite well in this poem because it seems to confirm and relate the overall message here. The praise of another, or one's other, like a soul mate that brightens up your life. So true it be, happiness is so often found through the touch of others.