Way to go!! Nice little inspirational piece. It was an enjoyable read. "I finally feel whole" is a good line, and works quite well in this poem because it seems to confirm and relate the overall message here. The praise of another, or one's other, like a soul mate that brightens up your life. So true it be, happiness is so often found through the touch of others.
Way to go!! Nice little inspirational piece. It was an enjoyable read. "I finally feel whole" is a good line, and works quite well in this poem because it seems to confirm and relate the overall message here. The praise of another, or one's other, like a soul mate that brightens up your life. So true it be, happiness is so often found through the touch of others.