Vow of Silence

She took a vow of silence

To save herself from him

She promised her friends it wasn't love

Because she knew what they'd say



He took a vow of silence

To save her from her past

He'd kill himself to save her

And he knew what had to be done



They met one night at dark

And kissed goodbye one last time

And went on their ways hoping someday

They'd be togeather again.

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hey.This is a cool poem,I like it.The only thing I don't like about it is the last line,'they'd be together again'.really really overused.no worries,im having the same problem with the last line on one of mine.I like how the first part is about her,then the 2nd about him,and then the last part about both of them.I dunno,it just appeals to me.drop by my page and check out some of my stuff sometime if ya get the chance.later.
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