She took a vow of silence
To save herself from him
She promised her friends it wasn't love
Because she knew what they'd say
He took a vow of silence
To save her from her past
He'd kill himself to save her
And he knew what had to be done
They met one night at dark
And kissed goodbye one last time
And went on their ways hoping someday
They'd be togeather again.
hey.This is a cool poem,I like it.The only thing I don't like about it is the last line,'they'd be together again'.really really overused.no worries,im having the same problem with the last line on one of mine.I like how the first part is about her,then the 2nd about him,and then the last part about both of them.I dunno,it just appeals to me.drop by my page and check out some of my stuff sometime if ya get the chance.later.
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