You are talented for sure. I saw this poem as the moment before somebody's choice of life or death. They see into the future of their own death and suffering they will endure as they fear the agony of hell, rejected by heaven. The ending makes it seem as if they survive to live longer hiding their fears or sins, but never feeling accepted. Just leaving my thoughts since this is a great piece of work.
You are talented for sure. I
You are talented for sure. I saw this poem as the moment before somebody's choice of life or death. They see into the future of their own death and suffering they will endure as they fear the agony of hell, rejected by heaven. The ending makes it seem as if they survive to live longer hiding their fears or sins, but never feeling accepted. Just leaving my thoughts since this is a great piece of work.
Thank you for the comment.
Thank you for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed this handful of words.