So you think you’re ok?
A1 never better, as fine as the rain
So tell us, why then
Is your life like a broken limb of a tree?
Swinging carelessly, an ignorant fool to callous gales.
Silly little man
You almost succeed every eleven
But now you accomplish it thrice in twelve
A vial of poison the sweetest perfume
At the searing edge of another cathartic thrust.
Now,
Watch him hiss and fry
From a trillion single points of light:
Red-raw, violet-dead and dry–
As poppy seeds would burst and fly
Chasing pearls of stony silences on a downhill run
Their sneering smiles a high-speed spin
Their hearts of ice filled with sharpest needles of fire–
The wolf-breaths of a jousting, laughing, singing choir.
NJP 19/10/2003
i love this poem
I really liked this poem. Actually I don't believe I have read a poem of yours I didn't like. You seem to be a very accomplished writer. If you have the time I would appreciate it if you would look at a few of my works and give me some advice.