Heavenly bliss felt with one kiss
Like the feelings felt from a slow jam interlude
So divine you define the definition of beatitude
Open arms I surrender all mind, body and soul
My heart is in your hands you have complete control.
To be continued
Absolutely beautiful...your poetry has a way of touching what real love is. Much Luv, Jay
Hey, it's great so far. Hope you decide to continue it. I'll be checkin' back to see if ya do. :-) I love your work, you're great.
~*~ Jill ~*~
Heavenly Bliss had to comment on this poem as I have a poem with the same title not as good as yours ofcourse :)
Rose
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