Confessions of a drunken douchebag Part 2


Well this is the story of louise aden

Sweet sweet girl

When I think of how I used her my heart starts aching

Born to mother with drug problems

Always sleeping with different men to solve her problems

So louise developed a twisted version of love 

Atleast she made sure all her 'boyfreinds' used a glove

That's right she quantified love as sex

She built up quite a rep

And I was next

I followed the sick standard procedure

Told her how I cared for her

How I would do anything for her to be sure

Couple of weeks later told her I loved her

Couple of hours later we were under the covers 

Eventually she found out our sick game and ended it

Felt so used she took her own life and just ended it

You think I made it karma free?

What if told u everygirl I see 

Is a crying louise

I only tell you this cuz I'm drunk

Can't stay with someone's blood on my hands no more

So I'm gonna end it all with the gun in my trunk

Author's Notes/Comments: 

2nd out of 4 in confessions of a drunken douchebag series

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Sometimes it would be nice to

Sometimes it would be nice to trade our eyes in like a car, eh? Good writing. I like the way you pointed out the picture of dating being like something of an 'assembly line', which is really a common thing in subcultures. Very real.

...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "


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thanks alot :)   check out

thanks alot :)   check out the 1st part