Life is a interwining sea of multiple descions
they splinter off even more to consequences and repercussions
Imagine a meandering river with its many tributaries that seem to go on and on
Eventually all tributaries lead into an ocean
All of their little streams and independent paths
They have a definite start
But eventually they coalesce into a coherent mass
so too with our many individual goals and aspirations
we all contribute to the legacy of humanity with our machinations
when haunted by self doubts, indescion and lamentations
think about the river flows on and finds the path of least resistance
so life goes on
and you find the path of least resistance with some assistance
beautiful
a beautiful and inspiring metaphor
Thank you :D
Thank you :D
Good job
I enjoy this poem, it feels convincing.
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Thank You
Thank you. That's what i was going for
That's What Rocks!
Using all your vocabulary makes the writing clearer - enjoyed: reminded of Wintersong: I wish I had a river I could skate away on. Magical write ~Lady A~
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