Across the waves’ savage faces
and across the rocks’ rigid stares,
keening in one sun’s setting:
one seagull. Alone,
singing through the air
- like a knife honed and sharpened
on whet stone and set then
blade tumbling, sun catching
to carve sure arcs of pure bright air
she wings to unwritten rhythms,
this gull,
long sketched in the seas,
wheels within the ageless chants
the winds and rains have freed,
and though caught and ruled by laws
of changing fate and chance
needs no rule to ensure the reign
of her own - grey wing and timely
inside story
white fire dance.
Seeming Cruel God
if I asked what
it might be
to sing live and fly
wind torn and die
free
would you
tell me?
this is really really good. i really like the way the second stanza flows the best. it just works amazingly:)