vehicle

can you  spare 5 bucks

I need to get home
get home somehow
oh these shop keepers
keep giving me their eyes
but they won't give me a ride
outta this old cold
back up the icy road
home
can you spare 5 stars
I've got a few wishes to make
I'll use one to feel the heat
underneath my feet
I'll use one to give my old lady some time
and the last 3 will make the music
myself and the world unwind
there won't be anything of the kind
back home
can you spare 5 minutes 
I could really use your time
I'll make it worth your while
spew out my odd philosophies 
and I'll make the weight of your pockets
and the burden of your mind
light and free
and when you're done
you can go home
oh I'd buy some new boots
if I won the lottery
my own two feet could be the vehicle I seek
I gotta head out somewhere
and head back home
                                  
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If this were the olympics: 9.5

Had to read a few lines twice due to no, no punctuation, otherwise a 10.0 - adored this writing from a fine pen - craft on ~~A~~