Rift

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My sense of purpose

Lost in a sea of flames

Dreams of landscapes

Shatter when I hear your name

 

I have spent my life

Building these walls to keep you out

The foundations crumble

From a never-ending barrage of doubts

 

I had just one wish

I wanted to close this rift

Leave the past behind us

And let the pain regress

 

You can feel the pressure

Just let it go

We've walked through war-torn cities

And we made it home

We've made it this far

We've made it this far

 

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Sassylass's picture

Consider

taking the rift stanza and making it the bridge adding the last two lines to it.

i can hear it:)


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

Carcass's picture

I appreciate the input!

I appreciate the input! Looking back at this I see that I haven't finished it. I should go back to this one soon! :D

Sassylass's picture

I like it

did you do music to it?

talent in motion

Koko~


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

allets's picture

Clear & Shared

thank you for this one. Nice to read, like "rift" as central. Encore ~Stella