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False Positive
Why does the sky look so fake?
Is it fabricated?
Am I medicated?
Have I been forced into remission
Or am I missing something?
I see a dead spirit in you
One whose light I've taken in a past life
I know you thank me
But your memories are daunting
This world is sick
Its a mercy killing
I'm not proud
One day I'll join you
welcome to my world
welcome to my world hahaha
i feel that not a lot of people can relate to my process of thinking.
im very strange.
I love your poetry. very deep. wish i was good like you haha
Matthew 7:14
The Narrow Gate
wow a poem that actually
wow a poem that actually explains how I feel about life. nice!!
Matthew 7:14
The Narrow Gate
Glad you could relate! I feel
Glad you could relate! I feel as though not that many can
This is beautiful, even
This is beautiful, even unfinished. I can relate to the emotions behind it.
i can relate deeply to this.
i can relate deeply to this. reminds me of a thrice song, between the end and where we lie
Never heard of Thrice, but
Never heard of Thrice, but they seem pretty popular so I'll take it as a compliment. Thank you.
Daunting Memories, Batman!
A poem to wander around in and be lost and found periodically - as is, fab - slc
p.s. keep checking in for a new write from you. Rereading is okay, but new reading rocks! - slc