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Stillborn
Hollow birth, hollow birth
From the bloody womb of mothers' spite
We've been miscreated
Cut the cord of dependency
Ecstatic yet lifeless
So much red stained on rustic walls
Rich and crimson
From the stillborn son
Is this evil?
Or have we become too sensitive
To a primitive reality
Sweet Angel of Slaughter
Teach me to reconfigure
So there is no revocation
Of primordial nature
Let the beast come
To release the abomination
I watched my mum miscarriage
I watched my mum miscarriage after miscarriage. I also wrote something when I was in my teens that had this feel and this topic behind it (Some school project thing). Anyway, it's very emotive. I like the way you've written it.
Thank you, I know its a hard
Thank you, I know its a hard subject to talk about since so many people go through it themselves. Being as a man I can only offer a one-sided perspective.
You Got The Tone Right
Horrible, but bearable and healing happens. As a metaphor it works even better, stillborn - across so many genres and philosophies and personal experiences. Hard on the eyes and emotions - it works for Halloween ~a~
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Thank you! Sorry it's kind of
Thank you! Sorry it's kind of depressing
After Pay TV
shock value is hard to come by - and pix of war aftermaths - blood on the walls has become a symbol for this time - women live with blood most of their lives, theirs, others - it's a life theme. In search of contentment :D ~a~
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