Thy pitted frozen heart

Carry thy pitted heart
Show your worth and compassion without present resent
No settled nor shy affection hides beneath your bitter extraheart

Glaring through darkened, tampered and burdened glass I wait
Restless and weak my eyes weep like drooping clouds above terrain steep
Looming illumination is what I seek

Haze such vivacious spans of armies until they submerge six foot below
For these are the soldiers of her impenetrable beauty
Those who attack my doubt and render me loving, questioning no more

Her large orbs like fallen twilight pulse
Flexing her intellect she dances around certainty and sustainable joy
Shall thy long nights continue until my lungs freeze beside her

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Capitvated my interest! A lovely write!thanks I really loved each verse and made sure I took to imagining the options of interpretations available to me,it's not everyday a Poem does that to me and begs to be re-read! ;) SS


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