I Cried Today

I Cried Today



I cried today

The numbness broke and tears flowed unrestrained

The images played over and over crossed back from the surreal

And lodged into a painful reality



I felt the threads rip from the fabric

I remembered the pattern, which can never be again

My grief is real



War is marching

Pounding its feet within my head and life

It’s marching again, as it marched before

But now its feet are mine



Amazing I can think clearly with face wet

Resigned to death’s advent

And yet I can



I see the cost

That death will fall again, again and again

And feet will pound while nations drown



And we will pay

For justice is never without cost

But deliver justice without hate

For the cost of hate, is too great

And vengeance belongs to Him



© Bart Breen 9/24/01

Author's Notes/Comments: 

An attempt to make sense after the tragedy of 9/11/2001.

View canuckster's Full Portfolio
palewingedpoetess's picture

I knew before you told me in the end what this poem was about. I think every poet has written something about the trauma and utter disbelief and grief of that dreadful day. mine were less sad and more so angry but the pain was there all the same. I love poems that give the reader a sense of what the writer is like. this one is a gem, truly. thanks for sharing! a sincere fan, melissa

Lori Moore's picture

You have some excellent poetic images here. Very good.

Tammy Steele's picture

Hey, this is an excellent poem! You did well.