Ok. This s a first for me. I tried to make the last letter of each line say something, too. Not just the first. I cheated in the last line and used '!' lol
20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — Deborah Russell (not verified)
good style...and a bit of difficulty in producing... i love it though and worked on one just today...thanks! gives the reader a little something extra...
awesome.... loved that way that you did the first letter and last letter saying something... nice touch to a wonderfully thought out poem... thank you for sharing this with us and glad that it was in the top 10.... made me smile... Renee'
How can anything that is written for the love of a man / woman be wrong ? Beautiful dedication! Amy Riberdy
Gentle is the night♥
good style...and a bit of difficulty in producing... i love it though and worked on one just today...thanks! gives the reader a little something extra...
awesome.... loved that way that you did the first letter and last letter saying something... nice touch to a wonderfully thought out poem... thank you for sharing this with us and glad that it was in the top 10.... made me smile... Renee'
A winner! I like it, Donald. Great Acrostic.
okay, I had to add this.......a winner indeed.and the ! fit in perfectly. ;-)
Donald, I thought it your absolute best!!! I shit you not!!! I loved it!!!