when i consider the cost of being a king... smoke fills the air
and when the smoke fills the air i think about the cost of my words
they burn a total inside the frames of the errors i make
why do my errors turn the locket of creation in my mind
why did the creator allow me the err
the answer is simple... he wanted to hear what he did wrong.
What a wonderfull way to
What a wonderfull way to say "to err is human, to forgive is divine" and also another saying comes to mind "We learn from our mistakes". To forgive ourselves the mistake we have made and to move on to be a creator and innorvator is marvellous, don't you think? I like your poem immensley human, divine and godlike as creator I think our species creativity is amazing, like your poem; what a lovely creation.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
Thank you, your comment is
Thank you, your comment is inspiring