Amidst the current
Tied
subtle dreams
glistening white snow
upon vast expanses of ice
broken by the light
listing and falling
wrenched in the abyss
caught unaware
despair
the only desire flying
trying
"...glistening white snow
broken by the light..."
A truly fine seeable image that can be shared on an emotional plane as observed. Exception line. Rare. ~allet~
thank you for taking the time to comment on my works, it is inspiring --- I probably would have given up without the comments... I always feel like my writing has no value
Inside The Rhyming
"...glistening white snow
upon vast expanses of ice
broken by the light..."
A truly fine seeable image that can be shared on an emotional plane as observed. Exception line. Rare. ~allet~
thank you for taking the time
thank you for taking the time to comment on my works, it is inspiring --- I probably would have given up without the comments... I always feel like my writing has no value