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Fingertips away
Touch the sky
My heart
Touch the sky
Breathe the night
My heart
Breathe the night
The sky is wide
My heart
The sky is wide
The night is long
My eyes
The night is long
Pluck your star
My eyes
Pluck your star
It's not so far
My eyes
It's not so far
Just a little reaching for
The light
The form of verse you have
The form of verse you have chosen here, especially the repeated phrase which has a ritualized sound to it, heightens the evocative nature of the poem. You have achieved a lot in this one.
Starward
I feel
that Starward has put it best.