Storm clouds rest on the horizon of her cheeks
Wind rustles her golden locks
wrapping warmth around the glow of her complexion
The glowing face of a mermaid
Centered in the storm she created within me
A sailor lost in her storm...
and happily so...
I jump from my ship of lonliness to drown in her eyes
To remain eternally in the waves of her love
I drift while her whirlpool pulls me under
One kiss and i spin...
Pulled down...swallowed whole
At oceans bottom...
I am at heavens highest peak...
to live forevermore in my angels arms
In surrendering to her beauty
I give all of myself
In the hope that she will allow me to drown within those eyes...
within that soul
That she may allow me to touch that golden hair
and kiss those lips...
In drowning me, she has made me whole
May I always consume all that is her...
and may she always drown me with her kiss.
The glowing face of a mermaid
Centered in the storm she created within me
A sailor lost in her storm...
and happily so...
I jump from my ship of lonliness to drown in her eyes
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so sweet and lovely
Lauren:
Beautifully written with so much love beauty and grace. The visualization in this work is so so so intense and bright. Awesome work. Thank you for sharing and have a very beautiful and very safe weekend. Take care.
Regards,
Dave Richardson
1/22/2004
I hope he appreciated the splendor and beauty of this poem.