Bloodtrail

I walk down a rocky road

Dusty and suffocating

Alone I walk on and on

My shoes are long gone

Worn down by the loneliness 

My feet leave a bloody trail

Anyone can see where I've been

But no one notices

No one looks down and sees

What I left behind

A piece breaks off with every step

But I guess I'll keep going

Losing more and more of myself

Leaving a bloodtrail of pain

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allets's picture

The Right Lines

....losing more and more of myself...You write lines that are for every soul. This is called living. I miss the pieces I've scraped off and had to leave behind. Nice poetry penning, this ~A~


 

 

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Thank you, I appreciate the

Thank you, I appreciate the feed back. I didn't think anyone would like my writing so this means alot. Thanks again.