Almost deadly
Fallen complety
All with discritly
Lost souls
All with dead meaning
Nothing now worth seeing
Trust me
Just give yourself up
I drink u down like a cup
Like a tick
Im such a disease
I have myself to please
Shattering hopes
Truth shines over lies
Now its u
My love....
I despise
wow, this is deep. like a tick??? u can drink me down like a tick if u want. haha. read some of my work. :) the new one might be weak though.
you have nery nice format and is written well. Hope to see more poems as good as yours my friend.