Love Lies

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Almost deadly

                                         Fallen complety

                                         All with discritly

                                         Lost souls

                                         All with dead meaning

                                         Nothing now worth seeing

                                         Trust me

                                         Just give yourself up

                                         I drink u down like a cup

                                         Like a tick

                                         Im such a disease

                                         I have myself to please

                                         Shattering hopes

                                         Truth shines over lies

                                         Now its u

                                         My love....

                                         I despise

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Dora Lyn's picture

wow, this is deep. like a tick??? u can drink me down like a tick if u want. haha. read some of my work. :) the new one might be weak though.

Kate Owens's picture

you have nery nice format and is written well. Hope to see more poems as good as yours my friend.