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Such a relieving feeling,

To know that you are leaving,

Turning your back on me for the last time,

Earning yourself one last rhyme,

Before I close the door as well as my legs for good.

Bet you're wishing you treated me better now, ain't ya?



Because I loved you and I cried for you,

I missed you and my heart died for you,

Split its bloody self in two for you,

And now all I get is this goodbye from you.



Well so long and goodnight,

I loved you once,

I dreamt of a future,

But now as you walk away,

I do the same.

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well done a great love and lovely poem..mean it that this is a very good poem and like it much...your poetry is rich and inspiring too..hope you add more poems to enjoy... and wish if you go through my poems too... I am basically a peace dreamer and peacew wisher poet with 6 books and believe in love for all and peaceful world... let me share with you one of my owns says regarding peaceful life...(( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq )) hope we save the ailing world with our love poems... for ensuring the peace