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January - June 2004

Chaotic. Hypnotic.

Please write me back.



Addictive. Persuasive.

Please fuck me now.



Hating. Contemplating.

Please shoot me now.



Guessing. Stressing.

Please shoot me now.



Frowning. Drowning.

You shot me down.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I like the rhythm of this poem. I'm proud of it.

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 4:27am
©22 May 2005 - 6:38pm — brokenfairy
27 May 2005 - 4:32am — Jeff (not verified)
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Strange coincidence, as I clicked on this "Blaze of Glory" was up on my playlist (Shot down, in a blaze of glory), weird huh....anyway another masterpiece

22 May 2005 - 10:15pm — Alexander McIntosh (not verified)
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I like this poem a lot. I like it's simpleness, but it has an effective message. I enjoy reading this kind of style every now and then, it's very enjoyable.