Dancing Barefoot

my bare feet
Sinking into the
Soft, lush grass

The moist earth
kissing my
Sensitive soles

As my feet gilde
Through the intricate
Steps of a dance

my full skirt
Lifted just slightly
To show my feet

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This is the archetypal presence of true and perfected Beauty, described in this poem in deceptively simple language that, combined, creates the most profound reading experience. I knew you were very, very good; but, in the poems you have posted today, you have achieved a level of greatness that very few ever reach. Each poem I have read today deepens, expands, lengthens, and heightens my admiration for your talent.


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