There For Him

His head in my lap
my fingers stroking His hair
As His tears run down His cheeks

my voice soft and soothing
As i calmly talk to Him
Reassuring Him

i am there for Him
As much as He is
There for me

my soft kisses
On His closed eyelids
Taking the tears away

He moves in closer
As i hold Him tight
Our roles never reversed

i am there for Him
As much as He is
There for me

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Why can't the roles be reversed? Who makes that decision?


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This final poem in my reading experience of your gallery today is exquisitely tender, and therefore exquisitely conclusive to the entire experience. I have learned much from you today, and you have helped me focus for one of my next projects. I applaud your achivement and accomplishment. I have honestly commented on a few of the poems that I have not liked, and for that I apologize if I have given offense. But overall, I find your poetic achivement highly polished and highly admirable.


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