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(i have been unable to go to bed, having found alot more to do in r/t, then decided to get back online and read your poetry, as i couldn't wait until the morning - it's 00.45 here in the UK right now, and tho i need my Chloral, i also need to read your poems, and tho i cannot critique all of them tonight, i just had to critique this one and reply to the above critique)...

"Yes, don't W/we all?!"

re: this poem, amazing piece of work, as have been all your others that i've read, and i too have been tied to a tree and it was intense, it was a feeling of pure Euphoria as She bit into me and delivered other forms of pain (being bitten until i bleed being my personal favourite, aswell as Her personal favourite to inflict (apologies for being 'inappropriate', both to you and the one 'above'!), She and i are no longer together due to Her attempts to Dominate me OUTSIDE of scenes - yes i am the first to admit to loving to be Dominated during scenes but i will NOT have my every action dictated outside of them, so this eventually lead to O/our split, which, for some reasons, was unfortunate, but for others a relief).
Sorry for ranting on!, but i feel i can talk to you, feel free if you ever want to tell me to shut up - many O/others do, to S/some i will obey this request, to S/some i will not, for you i will, as i do not want to offend someone such as yourself, mainly out of respect but also for a few other reasons, which i won't go into now as i'm aware of just how much i've already written!
Right, i NEED that Chloral! Can't wait to get the chance to read more of your portfolio,
Take care,

TAAvSM x
(Thia Alisha Araya von Sacher-Masoch)