mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
oh ooooohh oooohhhhhh yeah
yeah yeah yeah
my body rises on the waves
of the pleasure radiating
from You
nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
yeah ooooooooooooo yeah
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmyeah
my hips countering Yours
bodies pulsing
breath catching in my chest
uuuuuuhhhhhhhhhh uuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhh
yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh
ooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
the waves crash against the shore
pleasure washes over me
i can not catch my breath
my back arches
my body shakes
shivers run up my spine
my body collapses
a huge smile on my face
oooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh yeah
As I have said before, a lesser poet would have ruined this. Only an excellent Poet could treat it as it deserves; thus, you have proven your excellence here.
Starward
reading your poem.... it gives me a feeling of that....hmmmmmm
Dr. Zayed Bin Zakir Shawon