i Kneel

i kneel at the door
And ask to enter

 

i kneel at the door
And ask to leave

 

i kneel in front of Him
And kiss His feet

 

i kneel in my spot
And wait for Him

 

i kneel with
my eyes down cast
And my head held high.

 

i am proud.

 

i kneel with
my back straight
And my hands in my lap.

 

i am strong.

 

i kneel out of respect
For whom He is to me
And what i am to Him.

 

i kneel because i want to.

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drangel's picture

I reckon kneeling before a

I reckon kneeling before a great beloved is an ultimate sign of your reverence and adoration...Some souls are so great you want to kneel before them. Just in exact prortion of the murderous rage you have for the despicable people, the most hated one. In that reserved sense the piece shows dedication and deserves my appreciations...However, I do kneel before my Lord and revere all others who are just mortals like all of us.


Dr S T Wali
Pediatrician/Pediatric HIV Specialist
New Delhi-110001

S74rw4rd's picture

Very mixed impressions of this---I find the speaker very interesting, but the way she turns the last stanza back to show just how much she means to him is extremely surprising and delightful.


Starward