You say you dont wanna hurt me , but look what youve done
you've broken me down in front of everyone.
Fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me.
i've lost count of the times i was too blind to see.
Im tired of hurting, sick of this broken heart
going to try & move on with a fresh start.
One word from you & i camt help but break
just one look, and i start to shake. Im weak
for you , you know this by now -
take advantage of this heart ; i wish i could turn you down.
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Good poems I like em a lot
But for critique, try to use words people wouldn't think of
Instead of coming out and saying it, too many love poems are like that
A mirror is all that is ever wanted from a shadow