Succumb to You

I repose with you in my heart
And stir to grey matter destruction 
You, drowning in a desolation more alluring than existence
A locus where God doesn't discern you anymore
All credence lost, obscured by inky overwhelming
I descend deep to pull you out, a futile endeavor
Perpetually engulfed in your madness
I end up faithless too
My heart bursts into shards of glass
Hemorrhaging on a floor of harrowing recollection
Now I wear my darkness like a little black dress for all the world to see 

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Again, your mastery of

Again, your mastery of metaphor and the way you deploy it is more impressive than my poor words can express.  The final line of this poem packs a real punch---like the finest, say, of the old Twilight Zone episodes.  I am really glad to have browsed over to your poems this morning.  I am very, very impressed.


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