12 September 2003 - 1:14pm — Jim Valero (not verified)
There are angels treading among us, though oftentimes we do not notice them. They have a habit of becoming invisible, though not always of their own accord. Their garb may oftentimes be sodden and bedraggled, their hair disheveled, & their eyes w/sadness filled, but they are angels nontheless, like the Dickens' boy in your wonderful poem about Angels. But underneath their fragile looks, a spirit strong & stout to go on living under dire skies no matter how badly hurt betokens the divinity to be found in every human soul if we just dig deep enough.
(Thogh there are evil angels too--as we too often find to our dismay.)
I love your poem. It's very well-written & has a nice iambic pentameter rhythm. I also like my angels to be strong. Thank you very much for sharing it with us.
There are angels treading among us, though oftentimes we do not notice them. They have a habit of becoming invisible, though not always of their own accord. Their garb may oftentimes be sodden and bedraggled, their hair disheveled, & their eyes w/sadness filled, but they are angels nontheless, like the Dickens' boy in your wonderful poem about Angels. But underneath their fragile looks, a spirit strong & stout to go on living under dire skies no matter how badly hurt betokens the divinity to be found in every human soul if we just dig deep enough.
(Thogh there are evil angels too--as we too often find to our dismay.)
I love your poem. It's very well-written & has a nice iambic pentameter rhythm. I also like my angels to be strong. Thank you very much for sharing it with us.
awesome
i love
poems
about angels :*).