Condemned to Bitter Leisure





It was a hot day in the afternoon

They sat together in the crowded room,

Some faces shone, and others looked distraught

But all hung on His lips while Jesus taught.



A lame man  outside voiced his desperate plea

To let him inside, but no space was free

But faithful friends were willing to remove

By patient labor sections of the roof



To dig a hole in it and push him  through,

A hole if wide sufficiently would do.

Deft persuasion’s  power did its part

And soon the friends performed a feat of art..



They dug- - some rubbish suddenly came down,

Trod roofing, thatch and debris clayish brown.

Mud bricks,  and litter of  a medley  kind

Fell on the heads below but Jesus did not mind.



Dismay there was at first, then hearty laughter

When down upon them came some chunks of rafter,

That freed by busy hands and widening hole

Did smash to smithereens an earthen  bowl.



Happy the man whose neighbors are so true

To punch in loyalty a ceiling through,

And feel so strong for one that does depend

On God alone and on some faithful friend.



That have themselves experienced some squeeze

And work no mercy’s deed from comfort’s ease

But having  tasted need, don‘t condescend,

From lofty snugness,- such a one call “friend“.,



To do this sort of thing does take great skill-

Four pairs of hands held on to ropes until

The unsafe operation was complete

And down the cot dropped at the Savior’s feet.



Aroused, the people jostled here and there

Within the lowly room’s parameter,

But Jesus marveled at true friendship’s strength.

That went to help a friend to such a length.



“From sins ,-- the Lord spoke- “son, you are released!“

Upon these words some pundits quickly seized,

And pressed a point polemical and moot

Thus opening up the way for a dispute.



The brawlers found the saying bold and odd,

For none can pardon sins, but only God,.-

The Lord serenely stopped the squabblers’ talk,

And bad the paralytic man to walk



Forgiven sins, - alas, can not be seen,

No matter how the eyes are sharp and keen,

But make a lame man leap is manifest,

And goods delivered satisfy the quest.



The man got up, praised God and waved his hand,

And found the pundits were irrelevant,

He took his bed, as bidden, leapt and ran,-

The Kingdom counted a new healthy man,



The man was healed and whole, but many are

Condemned to wheelchairs that can go not far,

May God in mercy make their leisure sweet,

And bring forth fruit of grace for this we plead.












Author's Notes/Comments: 

Jesus' Healing of the paralytic man.

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Karyn Indursky's picture

Great photo. It really enhances your poem.