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Water Blanketed (Traditional haiku)

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Rain upon my face

Grey clouds overhead me are

Like baby's caress

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Traditional haiku.

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 3:59am
©27 March 2007 - 1:09am — bluewave
27 March 2007 - 2:15am — Ruth Lovejoy (not verified)
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great analogy

27 March 2007 - 2:10am — Alan Cheng (not verified)
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It's raining, it's pouring. Nobody is snoring!! LOL

I really like this traditional haiku!! It's really good!!

27 March 2007 - 11:02pm — Bryan Adam Tomimbang (not verified)
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It's not raining here today. It's warm and windy. - Karyn Indursky