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Ghostly Yearning (Traditional Haiku)

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A year has now passed

Finches upon the rose bush

You never visit

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Traditional Haiku.  /  ... (?)

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 3:59am
©7 March 2007 - 7:24am — bluewave
7 March 2007 - 6:26pm — Lauren Ellis (not verified)
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This is ghostly indeed, but lonely and beautiful at the same time.
Nice job
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7 March 2007 - 7:21pm — Karyn Indursky (not verified)
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I don't like that I don't know who or what doesn't return to visit. It could be a person or an animal or a bird or anything. I'd rather be of the knowing then left to my imagination. Fill me in!