Rain And Moon (Traditional Haiku)

The Moon will cry tears

Once you tell it to break this

Unfinished promise

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Traditional haiku.  /  ... (?)

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Karyn Indursky's picture

Maybe, I'm missing something, but I don't get this poem. I don't understand what the unfinished promise is. How about you spell it out for me?

Ruth Lovejoy's picture

not sure what this one means