30 January 2007 - 10:26pm — Alan Cheng (not verified)
Love the poem!! I really like what you had to say, and I like how this poem or haiku is talking about fighting through in order to get through the ups and downs in life, and that you must give it all your strength in order to make it, and that's what I really like in this poem. It really gives out a fantastic message!! You are such a talented poet a very talented person who writes awesome haiku's!! Keep it up!! It would be totally awesome if you're able to release a book of poetry and haiku's one day!! =)
Love the poem!! I really like what you had to say, and I like how this poem or haiku is talking about fighting through in order to get through the ups and downs in life, and that you must give it all your strength in order to make it, and that's what I really like in this poem. It really gives out a fantastic message!! You are such a talented poet a very talented person who writes awesome haiku's!! Keep it up!! It would be totally awesome if you're able to release a book of poetry and haiku's one day!! =)
Interesting poem. What does fraught mean? I've never heard of it.
I often tell myself the same, especially lately