Caught In The Labyrinth

Mountainous possibilities,

a rat's maze to behold.

I'm trapped!

"Where to go?  At which turn?"

Under pale, sordid moonlight

my mind is in utter disarray.

Even my eyesight is beclouded by monotonous routes

shouting out for that single answer to tell you:

"WHERE THE F*** IS THE EXIT!!!"

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I'M GOING INSANE!!!  WHERE IS IT?!

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Marilyn Walker's picture

Amazing. That's how I often feel.

Mary Mackay's picture

your style is intrigueing. i like your writing. thank you for the comment on my poem. i will read more of yours as my time permits, mary

Bryan Adam Tomimbang's picture

This one is about life. Yes. How we are caught in a labyrinth finding a way, finding the exit...

Ruth Lovejoy's picture

cool piece, whether it a labyrinth a mouse would chase around in or that of life we chase around in. Now how many will look at the title and know what the title means ? Haha makes me laugh how many don't use a dictionary and how many are too lazy to look a word up. I myself collect dictionaries and have them back to 1930, also have the 3 original Roget Thesaurus books..