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Kind, Sad Eyes (Tanka)

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Bittersweet moments

Within my strong mind and heart

I'll pass down wisdom

So accept with strong-willed hands

As snow falls on the grass.

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Tanka.  I remember my Grandma who used to give me good advice.  I'll never forget those kind, sad eyes...

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 3:56am
©30 January 2007 - 5:09am — bluewave
30 January 2007 - 10:30pm — Alan Cheng (not verified)
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I'm sure that your grandma would've really loved this poem thtat you wrote, and I am pretty sure that the good advice that she gave you were extremely good!! =)

30 January 2007 - 4:01pm — Karyn Indursky (not verified)
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This is a sweet poem. It's good that she meant so much to you and inspired you to write. I'm sure she'd be flattered. I do have a question for you though. What's a Tanka poem?

30 January 2007 - 7:34am — Ruth Lovejoy (not verified)
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grandmas advice was always filled with wisdom