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You've stolen a daydreamer's heart with a hand full of clouds and molded it into something even she couldn't imagine. You ignite a fire that burns so fiercely within these arctic bones that it makes me want to run for my life.  I don't because the shivers as I thaw make me feel alive. That smile that would make the angels jealous, etched immaculately in my mind,  shining so bright it sears my soul.  I get so lost in those eyes of stained glass perfection, i never wish to be found. You find ways to crawl inside me and love me where i am broken.  I will love you for as long as the universe allows. Then I will find you in the next life and love you all over again.

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Love And Hope

"I will love you for as long as the universe allows. Then I will find you in the next life and love you all over again." Beautifully expressed. The eternity of this design. - A prose poem - well constructed and executed. The sprit should soar after reading such writing - and so I soar - allets -

 


 

 

S74rw4rd's picture

Re-reading this poem after a

Re-reading this poem after a couple of years, I find it still profoundly moving in its expression of emotion.


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S74rw4rd's picture

I agree totally, and find

I agree totally, and find myself unable to add anything to your brilliant critique of this excellent poem.


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