Hearts are broken everyday.

Why r u that person, that person who thinks to themselves, but never through the sound of those beating drums, like rain drops dripping off of a tree hitting the ground through the summer winds of others talking and talking out things, but never hear u talking to those who care mostly about u, but instead u ignore that one person who thinks about u all the time  even after what u put her through she still cares and always will, all she would love to hear is that someone cares, and thinks of those beating drums in her heart. She expresses her feelings, but he won't even really speak to her anymore, even though he is the one who has taken her breath away when they met. That breath that u took away is never going to stop whispering through the wind ear to ear of the one she has fallen for. He keeps ignoring her, but she still cares and is falling so hard for him like never before like he never even hurt her because of her feelings for him that keep wanting his heart to feel the same way. Hearts r broken every day. 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I just love writing poems and sometimes even stories. Please comment what you think about it. I would really appreciate it.

Thanks :)

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keep loving

what is that you love
and let all that you love keep on loving you
it was once written " all you need is love"
it may not be everything but is the most important thing...
you are writing from the heart...
so hone your skill
read then write
then write some more
it is what you love
peace
Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

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Thank u I really appreciate u

Thank u I really appreciate u commenting. I have a question though. U said my skill, read and then write, so what exactly r u saying???? Like did u like it or do u not???? Jw