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under these white lights

under these white lights

you can point out all my imperfections.

look harder -

you might find something you like.

i thought you were the answer to my heart-felt hopes.

you rolled me thin and choked on the smoke.

you want more than i can give

i'd write the world for you -

i do all i can.



how would you feel under these white lights?

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 3:47am
©3 February 2005 - 8:20pm — blissfully_yours
31 March 2006 - 2:22am — h9515
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My darlin chloe' I love this poem. It so sound like something I was thinking and never wrote. It is so good, keep up the good work my darlin.

6 May 2005 - 7:10pm — poetvg
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good poem
it caught my eyes

1 March 2005 - 6:58am — poetvg
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BEAUTIFUL WORK
ON THIS POEM

4 February 2005 - 4:44am — Jonathan White (not verified)
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wow this is really good. I really really like it alot...i just hope its not about me!!!