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Beautiful Like You
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2001 you can't be satisfied with what you have
such talent
the most beautiful thing in my world
I feel so insignificant
with the little I've got
I dream of being like you
everytime you live your dreams
makes me want to cry
I'm so happy for you
the beautiful
but I just wish that it were me
I'll never be so pretty
never take a breath away
what can anyone find
believe
or want to see
in the invisible nobody
it's not like you push it in my face
but I'm captivated with your every move
and the more I see
pain grows in me
after I trip
I fall fast down
I'm at the bottom
and above you smile in pride
you can take the world over
I can't swim or drown
stop saying you wish you had more
at least you're not in my shoes
who walk behind the beautiful
wish to sink so soon
it's better if I fail and fall
no one will wonder what I do
I'm tired of answering my nothing
because I'm not beautiful like you
katie,wow this is exquisite!
~*Guinevere*~
isnt it wonderful feeling like you are the lowest you can be on the scale of all thats great?! ummm NO!! i love how you express your feelings of inadiquacy, you come across very disappointed in yourself and wishing that your friend(s) could spend a day if not a few minutes in your shoes. yet you dont come across bitter or upset. i dotn know if thats what you were going for, but thats what i see. i just wrote a freakin novel, but all is good ;)
~ryss
wow, now that's an impressive critique. Lol....
Beauty is as beauty does.////And in the poets eye.////Your vision of what beauty was.///does certainly apply,<<<>>> Unto your gentle loving heart.///And all the things you do.///I wish I could be half as smart.///And beautiful as you/<<<<<>>>>>How blessed you be, to look around.////And see through greater eyes./// To truths that others haven,t found./// And never realise.////I read and then I turned away.///Had other things to do./////And as I leave, I hope I stay.///As beautiful as you
to me you are beautiful just the way you are. i love you.
this poem is so touching and there are lots of ppl who could relate to it. your way w/emotion is so truthful, so scary, so deep. this is really a great poem and your message of what you were saying was greatly sent! i really like this poem, it's very touching. [~*stepf s. flamingo the poetess ps. feel free to check my work
This is kinda sad really, because beauty lies in the eye of the beholder. For maybe you are even more beautiful to him.
So deep, so sad. You are beautiful where in matters the most. Your expression of emotion is so electrifying.