i stand there bleeding from the ribs
i then have my leg broken and kneel to the ground
i then look up and check all around
i see nothing
i know there is something
i was fighting a man
i know this i was doing hand to hand
death was taking its toll on me
soon it will devoure me
i then take my sword and stand up hold my side
i leg was not broken i just lied
i then swing in front of me
i drop to the ground and bleed
i say good fight and take my last breath
i then fall into enternal death
I think it's better than okay. It flowed veeeeery nicely. =]