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Voices........Come Back
no no no they are back
now more of them attack
the voices tear me apart
they start in my brain then go to my heart
fuck wont someone please help me
i need help from you cant you see
i fade into the white room
i once tried to kill my self with a broken bromm
they are back again
i now know i have but one friend
the knife
it controls them
they are scared of it
what do i care i dont give a shit
Now
i yell to myself witha razor blade in my hand
for the voices i will not stand
they tell me things again
i say to them i am stronger than this
not again i will use my fist
i begin beating my face in
to the gods of lif that is a sin
i dont care i keep it up
i tell the voices to shut up
i break my nose
those voices are my foes
the doctors come in and put me in a straight jacket
the voices stop with all their racket
i stay i alive this time
what do i do if this happens again
i live for now
I have one like this called 'Effective Repetition is the First Sign of Insanity' it'd be cool if you could check it out. Mine's more vague though, yours is a lot more vivid, i like it though, very well expressed.
Keep it up
Lauren x
this poem has some mad imagery tied in with it. it's great. and i like the whole "sequel to a poem" thing.